by naykedanonymous
The gentle progression of your characters through the stories is well done, but that also means that the story keeps extending through more episodes....which means that I have to wait another week or so for the fourth part. Can you possibly write faster? Well, I'm headed for the shower, and it's all your fault. Thanks
I liked the first two chapters better.But its your story, you do what you want :)
I was afraid she was going to get naked with the guy so quickly, that would have been disappointing for a story like this. Glad to see you're pacing things appropriately!