All Comments on 'A Fortunate Blizzard Ch. 02'

The story is definitely getting interesting, but what about Kelsea. Not really nice to leave her all alone upstairs waiting.

Both parts, VERY MUCH enjoyed. Enticing characters and plot. I hope you are working on part three. My only minor complaint, an editing would improve the flow. Like a speed bump, or the phone ringing at 'oh so wrong a moment', my immersion in the fantasy was interrupted having to stop, go back, re-read several times. Still both earned my not so easy five stars.

French is really complicated and Google translate wouldn't help you with that but when we want to say "please" we would say "s'il te plait", not "plaire". Other than that, et was magnifique, like always.

I hope I'm not stupidly optimistic when I think that your come back means that's we will get another "it's a brave New world" chapter but either way it's good to have you back!

Excellent stories.

Keep the chapters coming

I sure hope there is more!!!!

Keep it going

Great story. Loved the story line and characters. I really hope that you have at least one more chapter. Does Nicole and Josh rekindle their friendship or more?

Thanks!

We're on lockdown we need chapter 3!

Fantastic and realistic I would say. Continue, please!

Nice story. How about poor Kelse upstairs?

Really hoping you find time and inspiration to continue this. Enjoying it a lot!

Very sexy stranded story, and so many possibilities exist for this adventuresome foursome!

Three years waiting

Oh no! You can't end it there.