All Comments on 'A Foursome to Remember'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow

I definitely loved it.. It made me so hot reading it I had to attack my husband. Great job, keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
slow down

There was no build up to the encounter. No introduction to the characters. We dont know who belong to whom? There were no descriptions of what the players look like. Good story just need a little gravy to go with the meat and potatoes part.

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