All Comments on 'A Frayed Knot'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
WTH

Long and booooorrrriiiinnggg.

bobabcdbobabcdalmost 5 years ago
Excellent Story Telling

I happen to really enjoy long stories that revolve around decent plots and good character development. The writing held together all the way through. Would have been fun to have a sound track of the music.

LalawmanLalawmanalmost 5 years ago
I wasn't sure what to expect...

I really liked the story development. Really was not expecting the ending as is so I was pleasantly surprised. Thanks for the great read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great read

Except not sure a pregnant person should be doing shrooms.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Well?

This story is too verbose and doesn’t have the script go somewhere. It just wonders around and says nothing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Timing is way off

Computers, Photoshop, and yet the touring Grateful Dead?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Too much

Seriously get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Really enjoyed

Despite some of the lengthy descriptions about records I really enjoyed this.

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