All Comments on 'A Friend Electric'

Still that is what you get when you upload your work last thing at night. I shall take this version down when I get home tonight and re-upload a better version.

I enjoyed the story, and it's refreshing to read an author who takes pride in crafting a story properly. But if I might make a technical observation, having a plug-in data port in one's body was a sci-fi gimmick back before we came up with wireless. You can't even call wireless a "trend". It's the next logical phase from having to physically connect devices. You can even recharge wirelessly. So, with that in mind, wouldn't it make sense that the hardware in Kami could be implanted in such a way that there's no exposed "port" which could be damaged or fouled by dirt, moisture, etc.? I'm just saying...

I really would like to hear what you think about this and where you think it might go, as a story.

Loved it, 5*'s, I'm really looking forward to Kami slipping into her dad's bed to substitute for the bot!

Much too short...

A whole plethera of ideas spring to mind as to where this story could go. The first being Kami starts speaking to her father through the doll the next time he is making love to it.

WOW! What I wouldn't give for a part 2 or 3 or 4!

Loved the story crossover scifi and Incest. Have to agree with the others, this story has potential for more, Kami responding through the doll to give her Dad a better experience whilst getting more pleasure herself. leading up and culminating in her and her dad making love without the electronics..