by AvoidingRealWork
An awesome story! Realistic enough that it is very enjoyable, without having an ending which gets so far ahead of itself as to promise a "happy ever after" conclusion, but leaving room for the readers to draw their own interpretations.
-- KK in Texas
I loved the attention you placed on Phil's feelings, the reluctance between both he and Sophia at first. Nice long, teasing build-up until the consummation. Very hot.
I havent been on this site in a while, and i was searching through the stories and came across this one. Would like to see where they went from there, hopefully they both found happily ever after in each other :)
well done
I gave this story 4 stars. I liked it a lot, I just wish it would have went into a little bit of
"the day after". I would have liked to have read about how they handled their first night of unbridled passion the next day. Were they embarrassed about it, did it damage their friendship, did they become full-time lovers, or what?