All Comments on 'A Friend for Valentine's'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
awesome!

An awesome story! Realistic enough that it is very enjoyable, without having an ending which gets so far ahead of itself as to promise a "happy ever after" conclusion, but leaving room for the readers to draw their own interpretations.

-- KK in Texas

slyc_willieslyc_willieabout 16 years ago
Very Arousing

I loved the attention you placed on Phil's feelings, the reluctance between both he and Sophia at first. Nice long, teasing build-up until the consummation. Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
:)

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

blackdragon54blackdragon54about 11 years ago
a sequel?

I havent been on this site in a while, and i was searching through the stories and came across this one. Would like to see where they went from there, hopefully they both found happily ever after in each other :)

well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very Nice

I gave this story 4 stars. I liked it a lot, I just wish it would have went into a little bit of

"the day after". I would have liked to have read about how they handled their first night of unbridled passion the next day. Were they embarrassed about it, did it damage their friendship, did they become full-time lovers, or what?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A tear of joy at the end

One of the best stories

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Friends First

Friends Forever

So glad I found this love story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Book bag

What happened to the book bag??

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