All Comments on 'A Friend of My Daughter'

Sounds as if it was a great one night stand. Sometimes those are not repeated. Trust me on this. Thanks for yet another great story, JB (five stars)

Pretty sexy. I hope Fee confides in Meredith and tell everything. See where it goes from there.

Yawn.

I thought the reveal would be that it was merideth instead of fee at the end.

5 stars

O. K. I liked this one short with no loose ends.

Bill S.

Cute story. I enjoyed it.

sexy story, 4 stars

Nice short story, well written. 5 stars!

this was a good story and written well enough I thought worthy of some suggestions.

1) Short enough that the setup about selling his business and being wealthy and what the ex was up to had no relevance

2) It was first person perspective but we didn't know what he was thinking. That he wanted to spank them, and doing so was a sexual thing for him. Didn't know he had designs to do more with Fi, so those encounters in the mornings were a bit of a surprise. By the final scene I guess it wasn't a surprise anymore, and I assume he was just a guy who wanted whatever he could get.

Spank me Daddy

I agree with Wood’s comments. We should know more what the protagonist is thinking, and through dialog what the girls are thinking. The story is more like an outline which needs filling out.

excellent; intriguing and sexy