All Comments on 'A Friend of the Family Ch. 01'

One long paragraph after another, WITHOUT ANY KIND OF SEX, put me to sleep. Skip to the end so I can tell you how BORING you are, ...and (wait for it) ...Done!

This story had a good, unhurried pace. For those looking for a quick short porn flick story, this isn't for you. I enjoyed it. Heck, it is believable enough for me to be a bit envious.

Dyed damn it, not died

I hoping Chapter 2 will have Anne begging for an ass fucking from her new lover. It was a very good story. She is one horny woman.

really i love the build up to one very hot horny story. now where that next brilliant part or parts you cant let this story die not now .

I would have loved it if I didn't find smoking so damn unattractive. Good job otherwise.

hot story, looking forward to chapter 2 :)

What a wonderful fucking story! Can't wait to read more.

More! Please, more!

That was fantastic!!! Whew! Well written story with a great storyline.

Cigarettes - lose 'em and the story is a 5!

So believable. Thank you. Keep them coming.

Read your biography a while ago and looked forward to this story. Pleased to say it didn't disappoint AT ALL, it was great. Very descriptive and sexy with it, felt like I was a voyeur! Can't wait for chapter 2 ...

One of my earliest (and most memorable) sexual encounters was with a heavy smoker. She at 57, was three times my age. Unlike Anne, she was a divorcee, not a widow. She did, however, behave in a very similar manner and reading your well crafted story has helped me recapture some very fond memories.

I loved this story. The smoking was a great detail. I'm almost inspired to sign up and write to the author to tell her how good this was! Keep em coming.

Loved it. Like a (wet) dream cum true.

...through your story. What a wonderful read.

Absolutely wonderful!

this story is absolutely worth it!

Is there a chapter 2?

I very much enjoyed this story. I found it quite erotic and arousing. Couldn't keep my hands off. Hope you return and do more

Anne, What an amazing story! A desirable much older woman. More Menthol 120s. Her best friends's son? Oh my God. Every boy should be so lucky. Can't wait to read the next chapter. These two need to get married. Jimmy's mom would understand.

I lasted 3 pages !!!

IT’S DEFINITELY NOT TRUE that “most people would find it awkward to continue to be friends with people they had once slept with,not to mention people their spouses had previously slept with“!This are SIMPLY NONSENSES!On the contrary,THE LARGE MAJORITY OF PEOPLE DO NOT FIND IT AWKWARD AT ALL “to continue to be friends with people they had once slept with”!In what kind of world you are leaving if you don’t know that THIS IS A VERY COMMON THING?!A VERY LARGE NUMBER OF PEOPLE HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO PROBLEM to REMAIN friends with somebody they had slept it!Then,MANY FOLKS are also friends with “people their spouses had previously slept with”,WITHOUT ANY PROBLEM OR AWKWARDNESS!And THIS HAS ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO DO with going to college in a some free spirited age and MUCH LESS with enjoying “at least one sexual encounter with each of the others“ while in college!NO,THIS DOESN’T HAPPEN because of such DEBAUCHED BEHAVIOUR,but SIMPLY BECAUSE OF THE GOOD RELATIONS RUNNING BETWEEN THOSE PEOPLE!So,STOP WRITING SUCH HUGE NONSENSES!

And IT’S OBVIOUS that THIS ISN’T A TRUE STORY,but only A MERE FANTASY!STOP TAKING US FOR YOUR FOOLS by telling us ALL THIS SHIT!

i loved the story and gave it 5 stars. I thought it was incredible that a 47 year old woman would think it was ok to fuck the 21 year old son of her best friend just because he fantasized about fucking her. That was bullshit.

Excellent writing craft; however,

I don't smoke.

You lost me when the first kiss was ruined by Smoker's Breath.

Very sexy. She reminds me of my wife. I’m going to ravage her right after her morning cigarette. Five stars.

Beautifully written. I was so aroused reading that, I couldn't resist mentally joining in. Well, physically, too, if the truth be known. I think the thing that made it so very sexy, is that I've had similar thoughts about my friends' grown-up children, although I've never dared to see it through. Anne.