by lick4her
I gotta' tell you...if it's one thing about stories that get me hot...it's the dirty talk.
You did a great job with this piece. The flow and eroticism of the whole story along with the touch of the sad reality of alot of marriages was great.
I don't know what it is...something about turning a married guy on whose not getting any at home is a big turn on for me.
OK, but too much name calling and S & M stuff. Why does the woman almost always become a whore, slut, etc. Can't there be a story, or set-up, that leads to a nice, descriptive, round of loving sex? JUST MY OPINION...