All Comments on 'A Friendly Game'

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LeibowitzLeibowitzabout 4 years ago

A terrific story, managing to be simultaneously sweet and sad. I enjoyed the writing style, which flirts with stream of consciousness.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

A little bit different but still enjoyed it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very good indeed.

Well done, great story (which seemed to be autobiographical ??).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

I came here for erotica and was enthralled by this story. It’s sweet and sad honestly you should become a novel writer you have a good writing voice. ✯✯✯✯✯

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Beautiful!

Loved it! :)

WittyUserNameWittyUserNameover 1 year ago

I like how descriptive this was. Very nice!

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