All Comments on 'A Full Nest Ch. 07'

Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

Nothing better than sex and a HAPPY ENDING. .

Surprised that you had Toon not be a virgin and have her fuck her Prom date. I guess the "to forget Rye if she needed to live without him". Rye did have some sex with his Prom date. Although only "69" with her. She had loved Rye since 3rd grade and he had loved her since 6th grade.

I hope you end this story. It is TOO PERFECT with Belle and Beth each having a child and the ending of Rye and Toon having TWINS and the names.

You have some real writing talent, aside from the subject matter. A little refinement and editing help would do wonders, but you did a really nice job on the story and character development. The dialogue, for the most part, felt as natural and realistic as it possibly can in this sort of story, and the back story was rich and thorough. A+ work. I'm excited to see your next submission!

Okay I read every chapter, where did ZOE come in? By the way it was a great and fun read, in spite of the tragedies. Any chance of taking it further or would that just ruin it?

This is one of the most amazing story I've ever read here. Not just erotic, but Other a huge character development. I cried when I read the dinner scene. Thank you very much.

Great job

I want more

I wanted Ryan to get hus Aunt at least once

Great story

Thank you for your hard work

Absolutely loved this.. what a fantastic chapter.. very good.. can’t say enough, loved the ending 👍👍👍. Thank you for writing this.. I needed a happy ending this weekend. 👍

it has all the elements many writers so often forget about on this site: a great story line, solid dialogue, well-written, good sex, some love, romance and family, and a terrific ending. 5 stars. GREAT JOB!!! anxious to read more from you soon!

That was without a doubt an absolutely brilliant story. It has a bit of everything and it was written so well. I am so looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Loved every chapter. What a hot sexy romp. I only have one question about the ending which seemed a little rushed. Who is the childrens father? Obviously Rye is for Toons but who is Belle & Beths childrens Daddy?

Really really good story.

Really good story I had to read from start to finish.

Although the last page or so seemed rushed, almost incomplete.

Really nice plot it was.

I really love the gentle, soft dominance. How it's about trusting each other and letting oneself entirely on the other.

And good family love story too. How they care about each other and get through hard times.

I wish this got more credit and much more views!

Absolutely wonderful story. Well written and superbly delivered!

So, did Ryan father Bethanys Daniel and get Belle pregnant too?

It is not clear in the story, but l assume so. Great ending

5/5

Awesome ending! Enjoyed most of the way through. 5*

Great series, excellent ending!!!!!

10/10!!!!!

Tagged femdom ?

I have the same question as Wargamer - who fathered Belle and Bethany’s children? I assume it wasn’t Ryan as this didn’t seem like that kind of incest story

Amazing series.