All Comments on 'A Game of Basketball Pt. 06'

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theanimalharveytheanimalharveyabout 5 years ago

Love the story so far, cant wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
5 STARS

you're killing it with this series. I've loved every chapter so far. you have a series talent for this.

TwoStrokesToMidnightTwoStrokesToMidnightabout 5 years ago

I’ve been on Literotica for over 10 years and this is by far my favourite series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

How has Dave not put it together yet and figured out Nicole is Kevin?

Love the story, keep 'em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
AWESOME

One very well written story that keeps you hanging on every word.

Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

The whole 'it's glaringly obvious she was Kevin' thing is starting to get annoying. There's teasing a concept, then there's beating the reader over the head over and over and over.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nicole\Kevin

Dave should pick is Zach is his Nicole on the lunchellt

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
How dumb can a guy be?

Dave isn't too bright, is he? Ugh. Enough already, spill the beans on the Kevin "mystery" and move on. Skipping the sex parts now, they've become kind of boring. Still a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
real

I'm dating a trans person right now (ftm) and I do my best to make them feel as they are. Touched me a bit. Your work is hot, just keep an eye for the small typos I was seeing (but it may e since I'm reading mobile) and keep up the AMAZING work.

Only_a_readerOnly_a_readerover 2 years ago

First time I'm not getting a boner while reading somthig here in literotica. Look if the plot is what really matters when you read a story, that I', alomst skipping the sex parts, for me it don't matter anymore, sex isn't gonna change the life of any of the characters, so Dave taking Nicole's dick isn't exciting anymore. And I think that everybody must have figured out the reasons of Kevin's moving and Nicole's uneasiness towards Santa Barbara

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