by phoenixcinders
you're killing it with this series. I've loved every chapter so far. you have a series talent for this.
I’ve been on Literotica for over 10 years and this is by far my favourite series!
How has Dave not put it together yet and figured out Nicole is Kevin?
Love the story, keep 'em coming.
One very well written story that keeps you hanging on every word.
Looking forward to reading more.
The whole 'it's glaringly obvious she was Kevin' thing is starting to get annoying. There's teasing a concept, then there's beating the reader over the head over and over and over.
Dave isn't too bright, is he? Ugh. Enough already, spill the beans on the Kevin "mystery" and move on. Skipping the sex parts now, they've become kind of boring. Still a good story.
I'm dating a trans person right now (ftm) and I do my best to make them feel as they are. Touched me a bit. Your work is hot, just keep an eye for the small typos I was seeing (but it may e since I'm reading mobile) and keep up the AMAZING work.
First time I'm not getting a boner while reading somthig here in literotica. Look if the plot is what really matters when you read a story, that I', alomst skipping the sex parts, for me it don't matter anymore, sex isn't gonna change the life of any of the characters, so Dave taking Nicole's dick isn't exciting anymore. And I think that everybody must have figured out the reasons of Kevin's moving and Nicole's uneasiness towards Santa Barbara