All Comments on 'A Game of Cards'

It looked from the 'Index' synopsis as though it might be a good story - but then you went and ruined it!!

Any story that includes "you" as one of the participants has totally wrecked any possibility of believability right from the start, since the Reader KNOWS that they were NOT a participant!!

No believability - waste of time bothering with it!!

Sorry - 1 star!!

Despite what the other poster said, I really liked it. 'You' can be a player in any story IF you have an imagination. Very good read keep writing!