All Comments on 'A Game of Dress-Up'

Love these types of erotica.

Dr M, I loved this story, as well as Chapter Two. Again, it had a great sense of going somewhere, along with an undeniable naughty eroticism that gripped you from the first paragraph. Like the first commentator, I LOVE these types of stories.

This is the first story I read of yours and I have to say that it was incredible!

I intend to read more...

*Honey

Quite a tasty little morsel! A favorite theme of mine--the forbidden fantasy fulfilled (almost) by force. And generously sprinkled with such sweet accents as:

"...her lipstick was so shiny it was almost obscene, as if her lover's semen still glistened on her lips."

Wow. You're a great writer, and your story was very hot. I hope to read more :)

Wow.. awesome. I love the fluidity and vividness of your writing!

And the fantasy is one of mine too...

Keep it COMING!

Your story left my panties soaked..mmm, good job..:)

this story gets a heart rate up. The emotions...the words used. You did a nice job. Your writing is excellent and the thoughts are good. Original!

Reading this story was like reading one of my deepest, darkest fantasies. In fact, I can still remember the first time I dressed up like a little slut just to masturbate... :)

To say that I enjoyed your story would be an understatement. I'm sure I'll be back to read it again soon...

Keep up the good work sugar, I look forward to more from you. ;)

I liked the way you got into her head. I also liked how you described her.

fuckin wonderful sexiest story iv rd so far thanks

fawn, fawn

gush, gush

etc. etc.

i was cumming just readin it

so hot ! well written ! umm kinda wet now ;)

Unbelievable. You should really write more, this was incredibly erotic. I'm not ashamed to say that I masturbated while I read it... and I never do that. :)

THIs was the most erotic i have read recenntly. Love to hear more of her

great job with the psychological detail--that's what makes or breaks it.

This is an amazing story!! I love how her thoughts were so confused, and how Mr. Taylor then tells her he's free next weekend. That made me laugh :P. It was really well written!!! AWESOMENESS ^^

Damn I wish this was me!

That was so good thankyou.

What I really want to read is how she prepares herself for next Saturday. What she wears, preferably sluttier, what toys she brings, and how she begs for it!

I liked the other chapters - where did they go?

For those of you who've asked, I'd like to say that this story is actually just the first chapter in a book called, "A Game of Dress-Up", published by Ellora's Cave. Literotica rules prevent me from posting a link to the book, but if you google "Ellora's Cave" and then do an author search on Elliot Mabeuse, you should be able to read the rest of Vanessa and Mr. Taylor's story.

My sincere thanks to all who have enjoyed the story and taken the trouble to comment on it. May all your dreams come true. :-)

I think I might get that book :)

The way you first set up an all too familiar female inner conflict, and then use raw and nasty poetic artillery to indirectly document a woman's transgression, liberation, and transcendence, is quite unforgettable.

Thank you.

- GreenOrgyKing

I love your work. This story in particular especially. Your words, what she goes through.. Certainly set up many a good night for me. Thank you

I could have sworn I read this awhile back and it was the first part of a three stories. The second story took place in Mr. Taylor's house and the third story took place in Vegas. Am I crazy? Maybe it was written by someone else. Either way, thanks for this story - so awesome!

Yes, oh yes. It could have been a story about me - right down to me being taken by one of my mother's frends. Mmmmmmmmmmmmm

A nice sexy story.

Can we have more please, as suggested by other peoples comments

That was no whore, that was my sister!

But I didn't know she was that good at anything.

Well done, good piece.

i came too hard to this

Omg-it's like he read my mind. I'm a Dripping wet slut now.

Greeeaaattt story. Great story. Thanks.

I found it a huge turn off. How many times does a woman have to say no before a man realises it’s not his god given right to rape whoever the fuck he wants?

A fantasy is a fantasy, a lot of women have ‘rape’ fantasies it doesn’t mean that they want to be raped. The story just really pissed me off, she didn’t do anything wrong and she certainly didn’t do anything to deserve being raped.

If he wasn’t doing anything wrong he wouldn’t need to hide it. The really fucking sick thing is that if she tells anyone she’ll still be in the wrong.

Had it been a role play consensual ‘rape’ scene between her and whoever that would have been a sexy story. What you’ve done is glorified rape. I read your profile and have to say you’re a 100% wrong. Some things ARE sacred, at the very top of the list of things that are sacred is consent.

Hot A/F!

The only problem I had was that he is married and making this young woman complicit in his infidelity.

She tried to stop him, thats true. And maybe in todays world, he should have stopped, lest he be accused of rape... But he gave her a chance to stop him and she knew she could stop him but purposely said nothing. Meaning she wanted it too.

Too bad he was married, with kids though.

Omg. Literally a fantasy of mine. 💖

It bothers me how much I enjoyed this story... made me so wet. I now know what I can dream of tonight. Sweet dreams to me!

i hope there is a part two to this at some point

I thought "vanessa" was at least gonna smoke 1 cigarette.