by MisterWildCard
Very sexy, tho I think you kinda went overboard with the threesome.
Maybe a little more preparation before introducing another character.
Other than that, perfect story for the genre.
Excellent as always, though Gwen could have used a little more setup imo. I loved the references peppered in. I miss Extra Credits and Extra History, they haven’t been the same since Dan left. His stuff on Playframe is top-notch, though! Thank you for the story, and have a good day!
- Tea, Emperor of America
As Mahamed I would be disappointed that Yvette gave it up to a couple of random guys just a few days prior to there own phughing. How lucky that Gwen is that kind of woman. This begs for the third key