by SupremeF
really, really nice writing!! i liked the plot!
english is not my mother tongue so i cannot judge about the correctness of the words.
But the story taking place in my mind was amazing! I never read such a long story with so much joy.
I especially liked the development of getting closer between Maria and Donna.
The conflict about it was described so arousing!!! I think this is best class of stories to be expected from my side.
Please keep on writing!!
Left me wanting,an and hoping for more.πππ°
this is great. i'd love to know if Frida comes back. Or if Donna and Maria's relationship changes or becomes more.
But oh what a story. This was an easy 5 stars.
Thank You
The build up to incest was great . Good style of expressing .
Overall a deserving 5 star. Hoping to see a lot more of u