All Comments on 'A Gift for Donna'

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dommi98dommi98about 8 years ago
very intense!!

really, really nice writing!! i liked the plot!

english is not my mother tongue so i cannot judge about the correctness of the words.

But the story taking place in my mind was amazing! I never read such a long story with so much joy.

I especially liked the development of getting closer between Maria and Donna.

The conflict about it was described so arousing!!! I think this is best class of stories to be expected from my side.

Please keep on writing!!

Randee1958Randee1958about 8 years ago
Edge of your seat.πŸ˜‰

Left me wanting,an and hoping for more.πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’°

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
more please

this is great. i'd love to know if Frida comes back. Or if Donna and Maria's relationship changes or becomes more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
You've only written one story?

But oh what a story. This was an easy 5 stars.

Thank You

DolphinsnoseDolphinsnoseover 5 years ago
Keep It up !

The build up to incest was great . Good style of expressing .

Overall a deserving 5 star. Hoping to see a lot more of u

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