All Comments on 'A Gift from an Alien or What Pt. 06'

Sometime in the Future you should consider writing a follow-up to tell how everyone is doing. Did Josh have children with his Children. Did they live happily ever after.

Nice story but at time hard to follow. Your grammar is atrocious. Before you submit more stories please get them proofread.

I've read most of your storys and your a very talented writer a few mistakes here and there but the quality of the story far out ways them.

This story is one of my favourites maybe you could write a follow up story so we can find out what becomes of the carracters and the base in all please carry on writing and I will keep reading them thank you very much.

Be careful about stream of consciousness writing. You were directly quoting actions as speech and as the end came your writing was getting more and more mispellings and incomplete sentences and fragments.

I marked it down a little for that but still an excellent read.

Plot line fair to good

the only error maybe if josh had cum in the native girls would show some of his powers

Like the plot

Really enjoyed the read. Keep on with the writing. JT

I loved all of it but i think you could have done more with it