All Comments on 'A Gift in Disguise Ch. 04'

There is a lot that could be edited out of this chapter, the continual recap of his sexual and non sexual involvement is not needed, it felt like over the last two chapters you 're hashed that with the lawyer, the urologist, and him self 4 or more times, and to be honest I ended up skimming ad skipping a larg section of this chapter because of it. Otherwise it's a good story.

This is by far one of the most entertaining stories I have read. Thank you for your creativity.

the recap in the last 2 pages was superfluous.