All Comments on 'A Gift in Disguise Ch. 10'

At times you use a lot of words to say very little.

Great story I'm glad you came back to it hope you keep it going it's a very good read

Anonymouses (or Anonymice?),

Thank you both for commenting.

Anonymous on 03/09/2017: I agree. It probably had too much detail that could just as easily have been omitted. Just my style to try and make the character interesting.

One Anonymouse, two Anonymice.

Lue

I sincerely hope to read the continuation of this story in the near future.

You seem to have lost the plot of the story. This chapter could have been half the size, and the cut half make a couple of short separate jerkers.

It started off great but it just seems like he’s being manipulated into having his ass fucked. It’s just gotten so wrong now in terms of the story line