All Comments on 'A Gift is Revealed'

please carry on :)

Holy shit the guy turned bie did not expect that. .........waaait is he bie or did he turn flat out gay?

Why bother with punctuation? Your story screams for more paragraphs - making it most difficult to read! I eventually had to download it and put in my own punctuation in an attempt to read it. But too much effort when so many others available.

This was absolutely great. The first part was hot and a good intro, but the second part really stepped it up a level by adding some intentional exhibitionism. Loved that you made sure the other man was taken care of too. It would be a shame to leave him tented.