by Rex Siter
Gigolo Jack's Surprise in 276 follows this story.
For the complete list of related stories, see my comment at the end of
Lessons from Sadie Ch. 05.
Paul in Oklahoma
Great story although with some jarring mistakes in grammar and spacing otherwise it was neat.
Good work.
Author, I think you have it in spades plus the written ability to display sensual emotion through your set up and plot path. Then, it is a decided plus that there aren't any villians to disrupt the flow.
Good work and hopefully more to come. Thanks with Regard