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jsmangisjsmangisover 3 years ago
Excellent First Story

I really enjoyed this story. I will be patiently waiting for your next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Playtime!

Made me feel as though I was there watching secretly. Perfect amount of details in my opinion. Your story made me wet and I can't wait to read the next! -Isa

yukonnightsyukonnightsover 3 years ago

Glad to see that you've decided to publish this older story you had sitting around. While it's not up to the standards of your newer work, it is a fun romp. I think your fans will really enjoy what you have for them next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice!

I enjoyed this and all I can think about is that Room he has!! 🍒

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I have just begun writing. It all happened by accident. My wife enjoys reading erotica so for fun I wrote her a couple stories and she liked them. I decided to try a submission and here I am. If you like what you read or have any comments or suggestions please feel free to con...

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