All Comments on 'A Girl Named Hope Ch. 04'

Good read. Believable while retaining sexiness

You have a good mix of realistic dialogue and descriptive sex scenes. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. I’m intrigued by the “much of it is true” comment and how that will affect the voice of the story.

I saw that Chapter 4 was ready and couldn't remember what the story was about so i started from the beginning. Boy am I glad I did. Beautiful writing and great story development. I can't wait to read what happens next. But please don't take too long :-)

wow - what a story. i like the intensity. i hope you stay with it. 5 stars.

I can’t wait for the next chapter.

I hope Brooke responds soon. She will add some adventure to the story.

I would be glad to proof read for you. I have never proofed anything like your stories but I do have a MS in safety management. I love your stories and hope to be able to read many more.TyF4

Please make him fuck Autumn!!!

I'm really enjoying your series. But I had to comment on this episode because it hit close to home. I'm currently recovering from a nasty 2 year run with those damn oxys. Th