All Comments on 'A Girl Named Hope Ch. 05'
by Scott_Free
- 7 Comments
RTR10almost 5 years agoHope is fucking crazy! Haven’t they only known each other for a few days, a week at the most? Calling his wife a bitch & wanting to get pregnant. Would be an interesting twist to have Hope & Brooke be the same person....sexual abuse as a child made Hope adopt another personality.
Literotfan83almost 5 years agoLoving this storyline and looking forward to reading the next chapter. I like how the characters are going and would love to see some drama kick in as I have a feeling you are leading into with some of the characters such as the father, the wife and the butch boss. Definitely be great to see that expand to see the characters together against them.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoGreat story so far! Hope seems pretty hot, but is definitely damaged goods. I am curious as to how this story will play out.
goducks111almost 5 years agoa little more intense, a little melancholy. Hope Hope doesn't get pregnant yet. lots of downers so far. but your writing is great, as i your storytelling. looking forward to more.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoPlease Scott, ease up on the serious stuff in your LITEROTICA stuff as it detracts from the sex aspect of the story. ...sigh, I love your Work Scott, you are a Genuinely talented writer, your story (which I suspect is possibly semi biographical and cathartic for you) is a format more suited to the Books and Stories you find on Kindle Unlimited or similar. To use modern vernacular this is more dramatic than fapping fodder.
I read LITEROTICA to be titillated and to ESCAPE the drama of real life, but here I am reading it instead. Please more sex and less Drama!!! Let me ESCAPE and get a little Horny!!!
bshell47over 3 years agoWe need more on the break up with his wife. I want to know more if she was fucking around or just doing drugs. It maybe too late.
Still would like to know more.
He and Hope are great.
Apollo22about 2 months agoSo I know I'm a little late to the party, but after the second letter to her sister, I started to wonder if maybe the twin sister is actually some kind of illusion. I think maybe something worse really happened to her, and her sister, that we are yet to learn about. I guess I'll find out as I read.
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