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ncng3ncng3about 4 years ago
Continue

Please continue.

holliday1960holliday1960about 4 years ago
Quality writing.

Small doses of seduction... it's a powerful story, EB. I like how you've written it, very much. This one is exceptionally sexy. You've had my full attention from the beginning chapter and each new one continues to improve! Wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More please

Brilliant read

sotarosotaroalmost 4 years ago

"I remembered the scar on her little finger as her hand gripped the handle on the bus seat, and the way her hands were so still."

Delightful.

AnotherLitUserAnotherLitUserover 3 years ago
Skilled writing ...

"She sensed me looking. "Nearly there, Adam." She had my name, she had my keys, she had me in her car, and we were nearly there. I didn't know where we were going, but Delilah drove me there."

What moods you create ... delightful! Exciting too.

rayironyrayironyover 2 years ago
Dripping,

creeping closer....

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 1 year ago

Loving the detail, the colours, the careful observation, the realism of these-things-don't-happen-instantly

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

Simplicity made exotic. xox

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.

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