All Comments on 'A Girl on the Train'

A simple story but beautifully written.

Loved it...

Looking forward to three more glorious days for these two stalk the other. Should be amazing.

Excellent erotic tension.

Creative premise and very well written.

Three more days on the train…..

Perfectly described. Eroticism at its best.

Lily… I love it. But you knew I would.

Wonderfully imagined and exquisitely written. The erotic pleasure of an author physically seeing his words find their way into his reader and touch her deep inside. Wow.

And now, three more days…

god damn. Probably one of the hottest pieces of erotica ive ever read.

Fuuuuuck this is was such a delicious read omg

What a thrill, to know your words have aroused someone to the point they need to cum, no matter where they are. You do that Lily. Thank you, cheers, Andy

Wow! So hot, so well written, great characters, wonderful erotica. I find it hard to believe, that the girl wasn't lily, this wasn't imagination, this was reality. Well deserving of many more stars than I can give. I could easily be that person, on a train, a bus, anywhere. I have favourite authors, at the moment Electricblue66, I can't finish any of his stories without masturbating to an orgasm. Finish reading Lily's stories and then give yourself another treat and try him, you won't be disappointed

Marvellous. Just simply marvellous. That's how to establish a strong connection, and everything is so kindly written. But through the care and almost intangable entering of the trancelike focusing state, this flows out so strong. Loud, but never loudly. Always balanced, yet strong. Wonderful. You are a great teacher.

Hot as fuck! No better topics than female masturbation and public sex. This is a wonderful combination of the two!