All Comments on 'A Good Father'

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mustang123mustang123over 3 years ago

Well written Thanks for the pleasure

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
enjoyed the hot tubas

What other musical instruments do they enjoy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A little overdone.

Somewhat over-exaggerated in places.

This - "Sweetheart, that was not piss but cum!........" - is bullshit.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

WOW! Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

ToughSailorToughSailor6 months ago

The prose did not exactly flow. The time line between daddy reading her a bedtime story with warm milk until she gave him a blowjob followed by them fucking was way too accelerated . . . .

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I recently lost my muse! She would e-mail some of her experiences and once in a while, send a photo of her to remind me of her looks, and i would build a story around her! some were private and some i published. Now i am in search of a new inspiration. If any lady or ladies wo...

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