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by EdwardStiles

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Huh?

I'm not gonna score it because it's so confusing. I dont wanna one ball it because it's potentially hot. But I cant five it either, because it's too damn confusing. So I'll just let it be.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 3 years ago

Switching between past and present tense is horrible, but switching between third person and second person is unforgivable.

What did the readers do to you that deserved that kind of treatment?

I almost accidentally gave you two stars, but caught it at the last second and changed it to the correct rating of 1 star.

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Edward Stiles is a pseudonym. I write under many. Although I am nonexistent, if you wish to contact me, I can be reached at edstiles243@mail.com. Cheers!