All Comments on 'A Good Student Ch. 02'

Really enjoy this - please continue!

This story is insanely good. Your writing is top quality - the way you're able to describe and invoke true emotions is amazing. Please continue! Thank you.

awesome story!! I look forward to more.

Hot enough to melt steel.

Again, great work, dr_m.

The simultaneous journey of discovery is marvelous to read.

Well done.

I couldn't help but cum as I read your story, I totally can't get enough of u...... completely an amazing writer and an awesome story! Thanks, looking forward to more to follow, I hope!!!! :)

I thought A Good Student ch. 01 was good, but damn, you outdid yourself this time! Please please please follow up with more. I can't wait to see how this develops.

Another wicked story. Thanks again for writing! Katie

i've never wanted to vote before. 5/5

thank you.

Thank you for this absoultly wonderful story. I was hooked to each and every word. You have a gift. Thank you!

WOW, i cant even begin to descibe how these stories make me feel. You have a wonderful gift and i hope You continue the story. Cant wait to read more! Its just wonderful

Incredible!`You have a gift. Please give us nore of this tale.

i've never wanted to vote before. 200/100.I LOVED IT

unbelievably good.

*Sticky Stuff on my Keyboard*

:) I Loved It!

You truly do have a gift.

It's amazing to me how what started off as a really hot BDSM story has peeled off layer after layer and we start to see just how vulnerable and afraid they both are. Brilliant second chapter, Doc. And knowing that there is a crux on the horizon makes the present that much more urgent, passionate, and sweet. This is a beautiful story, Doc. <br>

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Oh yeah... and hot, too!

I love how wild and intense these two characters become when they come together. Conner is such a sexy character, especially when he loses control with Emma.

If I could orgasm, this story would definitely get me off.

I've already read through this entire series. And yet I keep coming back to read it again and again because I love it so much! Fantastic work--I love the interplay of the BDSM and internal struggles for both Conner and Emma.

I want to be that student!

Absolutely breath-taking, I have never been so involved with characters in an erotic story.

Your writing makes my heart sing... and these characters make my body scream!!!

Why do I feel, the way I do...

Sometimes that is all there is. Spellbinding and slickery, Doctor.

I cannot express how much I enjoy reading your work. I am blown away by your use of language. It really is like poetry. This doesn't sound like just some other teenage jerkoff trying to throw out every dirty word he can think of. I just think the writing is incredible. I have to keep reading!! You just capture the pure, raw essence of sexuality so well. I am truly amazed!

Not only was this story incredibly well written and hot as hell, it makes me think there is someone out there who can understand what it is I need.

This is the second time I've read this story and it keeps getting better. Your writing is exceptional and your character building unmatched by no other but its your understanding of what women crave that has me reading your stories again and again.

I have been perusing Literotica for years and years and I have NEVER read anything so well-written. You're the Nabokov of smut, my friend. As glad as I am to have had to opportunity to read this, I really am disappointed that it was free. You should absolutely be getting paid for sharing art like this. I am so impressed. I haven't published any of my own stories on Literotica yet because I feel like they're too good to be read for free...but I am humbled by your writing - the style, the tone, the vocabulary... you are amazingly talented. The Nabokov of smut, indeed. I am blown away.

I cried. Originally i read this thinking it would be another one of those quick reads with sex and only sex. I got hot waiting for class to be over then i moaned aloud at the encounter. Then i cried. Only sex to hold her heart and soul in his hands? I know the feeling. But for me it was 'only sex to give up and give myself to him so fully. Only sex to let him hold my heart and soul in his hands. Then why did i want so badly to hold on to him? It was only sex. Only sex. Only sex.'

beautiful... Your story shows how well you know your self. You are fearless, at least about exploring this side of you. And you do it beautifully.

Thank You for sharing the workings of your inner mind.

Amazing.

Gorgeous.

My two submissive female friends loved this as much as I did! This series is great for first timers into the BDSM world. As a fairly new Dom (6 months now) I am always learning, too! Thanks for a great series that is a pleasure to read and very well written. =)

iteachu559@gmail.com

dislike: When you stretch out the 'sex scenes' by repeating a paragraph with synonyms, it sounds like you have a 'porno thesaurus' in your lap.

like: My kindred spirit, you have saved my sanity. The implied wisdom and philosophy in your writing is deeper and more plentiful than what is found in most classics. Your modesty is obscene. When I read your stories, I gleam in delight, inferring the immense joy that your life must be.

Keep em comin'!

...perfect...absolutely perfect...

loved it ..... all of it .....

Fucking brilliant.

Emma is such a hot slut, you make her seem so real....... fucking amazing.........

This is explosive stuff. Just reading it rattles the windows and doors of your psyche.

Reader's post orgasmic bliss.

I'm so glad I found these stories. Their so passionate, so hot and so goddamn erotic.

I completely agree, that this writing feels like it takes you by the soul and doesn't let go, and I feel like your description is flawless, and also your choice of words are extremely effective and really overtake you. I think you're very talented.

I love masterbating to your work. You know a lot about what a woman wants and needs, though by no means does everything you write turn me on, nor would I necessarily want the same treatment (just some of it!!!). In most stories I read, a man seems to man-handle the clit. That's not something I would ever like or enjoy. It's actually a huge turn off for me. But the fact that you at least mention toying with it, focusing on it...that's hot. You could teach straight men a thing or two! Better writing than the author of 50 Shades, in my opinion, though there is more about love and relationship in those books (of course, I haven't read all of this series so maybe you eventually get to that...). Keep writing!!

Yet i read two parts of your story and it is wonderful. Wonderful not only the exotic part but the theme written and described between the lines. The nature of human described with sexual desires is wonderful here. Hats off.

Dr Mann

With the way Emma feels, Its almost like you captured the emotion of every erotic thought. Very well written!

Oh my gosh I want more that story no that experience makes me want more more words description expression of something so explicit yet simple thank you

A lot more emotion in this chapter. You're capturing the beginning of his obsession with Emma beautifully. Still self-indulgent but I've resigned myself to the fact that this story is really all about him and not about Emma at all. And I agree with another comment about the gratuitous "sloppy cunt" smut talk.... not because it's obscene, but rather it's overkill and redundant... the point can be made much more effectively without a lot of that. Still, incredible writing! I agree... this should be published.

I love this story. You write very, very well. You command the language and you command my attention. This is deeper than erotica. You're making a point about the whole world of BDSM. It's beautiful, and deep, and intense, and emotional even if not everyone understands it. Instead of just outright saying that you've shown it through Mr. DeVlin's denial and resistance to the aforementioned facts because he cannot resist them. It is poetic. He doesn't use emma.. He needs her. The same way she needs him.

I love this. Very well written and I also like the setting. I read three chapters now, and there is no 'BDSM lifestyle' (with others involved), no contract, no first winning the girls trust first etc. Just rough sex, just the way I like it. I'm a girl myself and this kind of stories are the ones I'm looking for.

I loved your descriptions!!!!

I cannot thank you enough for writing this series. The emotion and the male POV is almost breathtaking.

the beauty of this story, and what sets it apart from most other BDSM, is the affection and caring. I absolutely adore it. Just because someone wants to be fucked wildly and with abandon, doesn't mean she doesn't also want to be loved, to be cherished, to be adored. Thank you for including both of these factors here. So hot and so beautiful all at once.

She wasn't sure he wanted her. Came to class in panties. When they came together it was like there was no control. When he got angry because she wasn’t sure, she took her punishment and loved it. He is undermining her low self-esteem by caring afterwards. How confusing for both of them!

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I read your first chapter yesterday, telling you that it was the best thing I've read on this site. Now I see why in more detail. You actually know poetry and literature. And you're a keen observer of the infinitely complex relations--especially the wildly fluctuating emotions that lead to unpredictable behaviors and unspooling reflections--between highly self-conscious men and women. Thanks for these efforts. I look forward to more. On a personal level, I also wish that I could have had a fraction of the self-awareness found in your professor when I was that age.

Dirty talk always gets me wet and your story is so full of it that i cant read this story without soaking my panties and feeling horny as hell

Fuck ! That’s absolutely incredible. She needs to drop the chump and the social expectations and hold onto the Prof with both hands. That kind of chemistry doesn’t happen often.

Love everything about this story.

Tess (uk)

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the male point of view in all things makes this story just delicious -- thank you

Perfection

Yeah, it’s still stunning.

Tess (uk)