All Comments on 'A Grad School Night Out'

You write well. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Good story line,nice characters...a bit more depth next time,nice sexual innuendo & build up was nice.

Rating would be 3.5 stars bein' ur 1st time & all,keep it up.

Very well done for a first time. Keep at it.

The writing is almost flawless, grammatically. Story line is easy to follow with slowly growing sexual tension followed by a hot night of a variety of pleasures I especially liked that Nat as she knows what she wants and how to get it.

Keep up the good work.

Really enjoyed your story, as a woman reader it reads perfectly.

Keep writing pal, your work is awesome

Great writing please write more

Wow!

Fantastic. Would love a chapter 2.

Many long time authors on this site do not come anywhere near the quality of your first effort. Are you sandbagging us? Please follow with many more chapters.

That story ist simply great! Keep on writing and hopefully many more chapters follow.

PhD? Pretty Hard Dick? After a couple pages of that story. If only grad school in real life was so much fun!

Pretty darned good for a first story, I'd say. Would love to hear what else is in your imagination! (Or encountered in real life...)

I really like the build up, keep on writing!

Very good story telling. Surprising that it's that good with only y

2 entries.

Wow. Great writing. Better than game of thrones.

Those were the days! When I could cum three times in a session AND find an ultra-hot girl with three willing ways to make me explode.....! Good writing too.

I enjoyed your story. You know how to write not just the sex scenes, but also the background, the characters, etc. that give the story greater depth. I found it a bit off-putting that Nat showed herself so clearly wanting to be fucked in all three holes - maybe it would have been better if she had not expected the ass-fucking until she saw how good the cunt-fucking was. I have a fetish about licking a beautiful girl's asshole, and so I would have liked it if you wrote about you licking Nat's asshole when she was standing facing the wall, before you fucked her asshole. Very good job. 5 stars.

Oh God it made me so hot... My little asshole needs attention now

Good story, weak ending