All Comments on 'A Graduation Present Ch. 02'

Showing restraint is about patience. And we both know nearly all virtues are their own punishment. In this case that last paragraph - "..not tonight" took it to a five for this reader. Thanks

Not tonight, but maybe soon like the next chapter of this story. Keep writing more.

Good Job, Thanks!

The tensions between Jackson and Andie really help the story. You're doing a great job building the suspense for things to come (pun not intended). I'm awaiting the conclusion of this series, be it Ch 3 or further along. Keep it up! (Again, pun not intended)

Definitely a great start with much anticipation for what's to come. Good job with these chapters. Keep 'em coming!

im dying to know what happens next write longer chapters jacksons so sweet

I had an English teach who I visited as soon as I turned 18. I moved away but we still keep in touch and this brought so many of my fantasies to life. Jackson reminds me so much of him. The imagery was to die for and now I'm left wanting more.