All Comments on 'A Granddaughter's Duty Ch. 01'
by Corpse_rider
- 16 Comments
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThe series is well written and has potential. Please keep it up. Thanks
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoHave someone proof your story. It was great but you used the wrong word. "Come for me" should cum for me.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agomy fave or all fave writers on this site is Shoguy...her grandfather stories are the best...nice job here..i dig this direction..love the older men w/ teens..hot! especially when guys are well hung and confident!..KOOL!
shoguyover 10 years agoi have written a number of stories on literotica (some by personal request) and have to same that i absolutely enjoy your writing style. even though our 'themes' are similar, your choice of word selection is different. please continue your writing-and in similar categories too
Anonymousover 10 years agoAs a grandfather myself whgo has had a similiar experience,I appreciated this story verymuch.It did not have the proof readin it should have had,but it was great just the same.. I felt the passion of Grandpa with a young grand daughter and the passio of a young grand daughter with Grandpa.Next time,use the word CUM instear of Come.By the way, have you thought of Granddaughter getting pregnant from Grandpa's seed ?
Anonymousover 10 years agolucky granddad and grand aughterboth realy enjoyed one good fuck whens the poker nigh t I think she wants the school to fuck her would be great al those cocks lined up go for it100%
Anonymousover 9 years agoI went thru something similar to this when I was 20. It was the best fuck I've ever had.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI new a dude once in high school. He told me that one weekend he stayed at his grandfather place and got an erected in the toilets.
Then a few years later when he was in college he stayed at granddads and granddad had anal sex with the butcher.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis was so very hot! Taking Smelly to the bedroom, to bed, was very sexy.
I should go to bed myself but, I've got to read the next chapter first!
Anonymousabout 3 years agoVery hot story. Only the huge belly of grandpa was a huge turn off. I know he's an old man, but at least make him built decently.
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