by DanCastle
5 stars. I hope more parts will follow! The ending is, well, unexpected. I'd like to know who killed Yoshie. This could become mystery fiction, I have a penchant for romantic mystery fiction.
I really enjoyed this and I’d like to see more. Great work on the story.
Fantastic, and spooky.
Loved it.
Et cetera is usually abbreviated “etc.”
Very nice. Spooky but also sexy. A strange combination