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All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 04: Perspectives'

by Pars001

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tjb50caltjb50calalmost 7 years ago
short but awesome

much more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great, could only be better if it had longer chapters. Five stars again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Add variance

Each chapter is similar, maybe add more girls from wishes, increase her tits to bigger proportions but its good. Same yours are yous tho.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 7 years ago
Okay story

A few minor flaws, but is at least consistent in those flaws. He suddenly had an 8inch cock but took a day to notice. If mine suddenly shrunk like that I think I would have noticed it straight away. How could the genie have seen anything in the past when she was in the bottle from the start. If she knew this from the bottle she should have known his language straight away.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Rushed

I realize that I am a little late to the party but I feel like this is way too rushed.

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Still going strong!!!

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