Great story, but poor grammar and punctuation cause a great many distractions and slow down the read. Although it is more than worth those little problems for the wonderful tale that is being presented here. ;-)
Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...