All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 14: The Addition'

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Thirteenth_StarThirteenth_Staralmost 7 years ago
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This is getting more and more interesting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story, but poor grammar and punctuation cause a great many distractions and slow down the read. Although it is more than worth those little problems for the wonderful tale that is being presented here. ;-)

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Good to have a warrior too...

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...

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