by Pars001
Having read through your entire story it is obvious the amount of time and passion you put into crafting this amazing tale. From all of us readers thank you for an amazing story and all the time you have devoted to it. I cannot wait to see how the story develops.
Hooray a small chapter that was very booring. You might as well just said. The evil master mind was the old Queen. Jake and the queen fought and the evil bitch lost. Wow I just summarized your entire chapter in two sentences yay me.