All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 46: Queen'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Keep up the great work!

Having read through your entire story it is obvious the amount of time and passion you put into crafting this amazing tale. From all of us readers thank you for an amazing story and all the time you have devoted to it. I cannot wait to see how the story develops.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Hooray a small chapter that was very booring. You might as well just said. The evil master mind was the old Queen. Jake and the queen fought and the evil bitch lost. Wow I just summarized your entire chapter in two sentences yay me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wow

Just exquisite

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...