All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 55: The Healing'

Enough with the one-page chapters for crying out loud. This story was doing great till you went to one page chapter's. Your not making any real progress and are draging this shit out to far. I'm about to say to hell with reading your stories any more. So will you please stop jacking off and get on with the fucking story.

What is your problem??? Not enough sleep?

This story and Pars001's others are quite good as they are. One or two page chain stories keep things fresh and I am sure most of us look forward to the next chapter.

If you really want a long story why don't you try to write one yourself!

This story is 55 chapters along and now you are whining about the length?

Most, if not all, of the story is compiled of one page chapters.

You need to switch to decaf.

Maybe you could speed this along instead of beginning new stories elsewhere. You are getting too long winded. These are called sex stories not "books".

I wish Jake could stay awake for more then 5min

Getting real sick of ending each chapter with someone passing out. It's a one time in an arc tool not a full stop.

If all you want is a quick story don't start reading one that's 50+ chapters long please and stop criticizing others for your stupidity if you do so..... Some of us have an iq higher than the number of fingers we have and actually like to read.

Jake sure does faith often!!!