All Comments on 'A Guy to Love'

I will admit this story went far enough to satisfy my desire for a good stop point. A "4", but there is still better in you when it comes to endings

she sounds like a desperate whore willing to jump in to bed with any suitable guy...rather pathetic....

I really enjoyed reading this story, but had to re-read several lines; due to spelling or grammatical errors. Proof reading, ergo correcting these larches would make this the 5 star story that it deserves to be.