All Comments on 'A Halloween Alone'

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TwentysevenTwentysevenover 9 years ago
Male Fantasy

See above.

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
The first part...

The first part of the story was going well, but then she had a thought: "if it was someone she knew, whose cock she already regularly enjoyed"...That and unlocking the door ruined the story to just a cheating wife story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
i agree

Just another cheating brain dead slut, no thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hubby is out with the kids?

Being dad on Halloween and his wife is Masterbating to the thought of "her lover" ... who the good husband apparently doesn't know about. That isn't a Loving Wife, but a cheating whore. And a risk taking fool, too.

starmanfivestarmanfiveabout 9 years ago
Good tension

and build up. I would have likes to know more about her though. Is she a tease or flirt? Does she enjoy her lover with Hubby's consent or does she sneek around? Will she experience guilt? Was the thrill of the seduction because it is so forbidden, or because of the unknown factor? If she had consent to play from her husband then it would not have been so forbidden to try a new guy for size. But if she didn't have consent then maybe she wouldn't have unlocked the door. Too many unanswered questions.

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