All Comments on 'A Happy End to School Life Pt. 04'

by BigRoMans

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TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Hot chapter

A hot chapter, but I do not think it's Romance in this chapter. Hailey is his stepsister. As for the other girls, I think they are too liberal. Lily seems to be the only one who wants to go slow.

Do not get me wrong, the story is fine, but for now (at least in this chapter), it has seemed to me that it was more incest than Romance, and as Heater has hinted, she and Hailey may be Bi.

Anyway, I give you 5 * for the story. I just hope the next few chapters go further along the path of Romance, and there really is no need for so much sex (my humble opinion, of course).

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

arrowglassarrowglassover 7 years ago
Lookin' to see where you go with this nexrt!

Good read...ready for more!

kyotie913kyotie913about 7 years ago
STUPID MOVE

You just showed yourself to be another asswhole who believes force is the only way to go, you should have kept it as an seduction. But like a lot of so called writers out there you had to turn your main lead in the story into a shithead who thinks only with his dick So that must mean you only think with your dick

sassyme17sassyme17over 2 years ago

I agree with kyotie913 force is never okay unless it's consensual. Yuck

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