All Comments on 'A Happy Thanksgiving'

That was a really good story. Excellent build up, and you leave me wanting more. Great job!

Good so far although at one point aunt carol became aunt Lois. Hoping there's another chapter coming.

Yeah, obviously it's supposed to be Carol, but if you care so little about your won story, why should anyone?

There was too much crammed into too few words. Take some time to develop the plot.

And who is Lois?

A really good story and I definitely wanted more. My only complaint was Aunt Carol turned into Aunt Lois at the end, a silly mistake for a one page story.

I am thankful to everyone who read this story and to everyone who left a comment. I sincerely appreciate the feedback and apologize for Aunt Carol suddenly becoming Aunt Lois. I take editing seriously, but that one got by me this time. Hmm, maybe Carol and Lois are twins and Dad is doing them both? Lol

I did this story as a writing exercise and wasn’t trying to create a lengthy masterpiece. Just trying to have a little fun with some time on my hands and share the results. I like to take time to develop a plot and have some slow build-up in a story, but this wasn’t that kind of story. Thanks again!

Tim needs to come home more often to see that his little sister doesn't take up with his friend Danny. I'm just sayin'!

I like the story just fine. Obviously you made an editing error. Who cares. Does this look like Readers Digest? My only complaint is I want more.