All Comments on 'A Healing Touch!'

Keep writing. M.

Cool story keep it up

Keep it coming, it is great!

Please publish the next chapter!! And please, pleas keep writing!!!

Interesting story. Please keep writing.

Not very good. For example, very early:

Having read one too many vampire movies, I was sure I was about to die.

I had to read that like five times before I caught what I had done wrong. I honestly did proofread the story. Maybe I need to go back to using the volunteer editors. I appreciate the feedback

It's got potential, but you need to work on it a bit. Quite a number of sections felt blocky and awkward.

please continue!

What will be eat or drink when he's resting after non stop sex?

Decent start for a story. Names and place names would help make it more believable.