All Comments on 'A Heated Drive'

I loved it

Short , simple, fun. A very good first story.

This was one of the better stories I have read on here in quite awhile. So jealous, wish it was me driving.

Looking forward to part 2...as I am sure there is more coming (pun intended)

Keep up the great story!!!

more realistic then most

Enjoyed the read. Keep it up.

I know how tempting it is, but you should try to avoid using flowery words that you aren't sure of. Like, for instance, inferred. Using more important-sounding words doesn't make the story better. Quite the opposite, usually.

"I'll roll the windows up three thirds of the way" = Closed window

Ok. Now grandma's birthday, in Florida.

Hope you don't stop here.

I got hard just thinking about the next EPISODE.

I'd love to see a part 2 to this story!

Great story, well written!

Loved this, but brother owes some payback.

Would love to see a sequel.

This heated drive got me very heated. I think the brother needs to pursue helping the sister out with a heated problem.

I would have liked that to happen with two sisters and a couple of cousins....I know of one cousins that has the hots for me...just may have to see how for I can go one day

Wrong word choices when you used "inferred" and "sarcastic smile".

5 Stars.

Thanks!

Couple more chapters would be good. This was a great start

too short...

Great premise. Finished too quickly

It would be great to get a second chapter to this story..

Nicely done but, too short...

Nice short story. Good writing, nice scenery description, some backround too but in the end you're left wanting more.

You use words incorrectly. Infer and sarcastic.