All Comments on 'A Heavenly Dream'

Well, at least that "pour young girl" wasn't a poor young girl, because having only one tit is bad enough! LOL You're a sick woman, but we love you anyway. ;)

...and what does this have to do with Nude Day?

You, Scouries, Sarahhh, and BFW are all the same person, aren't you?

I gave you the vote you deserve.

You must stop dreaming about me.

It was a really crazy story Babs but made me smile. I like to smile; for that you get a five. Readers sometimes have to learn how to lighten up. Good luck to you in the contest.

DG

Nice work though... even if I didn't quite follow it all. No worries... no low vote from me. Good luck in the contest.

Free association can be fun. Good luck in the contest.

I dream of you cuz you're so damn cute, and your little dog, too!

You're quite a sport and a good friend, too, for putting up with this. Thanks for your support.

Ladies, thanks for your comments and votes. You just have to read through all of the threads for the last year to totally understand this whole story. LOL It's been fun. Thanks for your comments and votes. Wishing you guys the best!

Thanks for all of your help. I'm only as crazy the next crying lady on these boards. Thanks for your comment and vote. Your friend, The Babster.

No i think you make it sound wonderful and challenging ,your thoughts are unique and certainly turn me on no end, i wonder who the caller from India was, as always I feel that your range of stories is so large that you are a true big league writer and must write and publish professional stories

great love you ravi

Very enjoyable, the way you strung us all along, and naked to boot (did we have boots?). Thanks for the little fun tale; it's always enjoyable to see a writer include her friends...By the way, who was that really naked guy, you know, the one with no flesh as well as no clothes?

But, what else should we expect from BFW.

Gawd, it must be tough when you spend all night dreaming about guys who cheat in LITEROTICA contests. Yes, I agree that D.K.MOON could give anyone nightmares and i was glad to see that you were prepared to name names.

But my dear, may I suggest that in future, before you slip your high heels under your silk sheets that you open your scrapbook of honest LITEROTICA authors, gaze for seconds on the honest visages of freddie and jim and sarahhh ...

I promise your nightmares will end, that instead you'll awake every morning refreshed, ready to take on the travails of having to listen to the constant whining and carping of the MOONMAN, TEX, DARKBOY and MISSHICK.

No one who puts up with them all day should have to suffer them at night.

Pleasant dreams my dear ... and good luck in the contest.

jrs esq

I saw myself in your story, and it was nice of you to include 'you know who' also. I didn't understand much of what was going on, but what man can understand the mind of a woman. Great reading.. Thanks

I'll refrain from making harsh comments to a few who have posted here. I know we haven't actually gotten along all that well lately, but this was a fun read. It gave me a good laugh, which was exactly what I needed. Good luck to you in the contest. (NOT AFRAID TO POST USING MY LIT. ID)

Actually, I first read this earlier this morning and just snickered. Hey, I just woke up. Now in reading it again it strikes me as really funny. The comments are hilarious too, especially what scouries said.

It was a bit disjointed, but then that kind of fit what you were doing...which was a dream sequence. I recognized most everyone, but I'll chalk up the couple that I didn't to my newness on the AH. Anyway, it was a cute story. Thank you and good luck in the contest.

I think you created the mood of that kind of dreaming really well and I enjoyed the tour of Literotica through the dreamer's eyes. I've read it a few times now and keep finding another layer. Nice one, Babs.

You set out a tremendous task as a writer with this concept and you pretty much pulled it off. Bravo. It had a dream-like mood to it throughout the entire piece which was incredibly important for the concept. You integrated the cast, and an impressively large cast at that, in a way that achieved your goal yet didn't exclude a regular reader - that was an amazing accomplishment. I think most importantly you had fun which naturally progressed to giving the reader a great time. I also loved the ending which just adds to the craftsmanship. Very impressive Babs, my hat off to you!

It works for it's target audience, I suppose. I thought it was a bit scattered, and I kept hoping it would coalesce into... something. I know it was a dream. Just a dream, just a dream, and just a dream. At least that's what it was to this naked guy, who could only stare through the glass at the jokes than frolicked on the other side within.

The dreamer's comments were sexy and smart and added a spark.

Now Git in the Trailer! I ain't mowin' all night!

Wish I had read it when my vote would have counted on the contest.

It earned a 5

Best to you.