All Comments on 'A Helping Brother Ch. 01'

Good intro and buildup. I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.

Can't wait to read more of it!!! Great story well written

But, it definitely cries out for a sequel.

good start but you need to finish it soon or your readers will lose intrest in your stories and you

need to finsh it be4 we lose you. did u fuck her the next day or what happen

another usless wannabe writer that can't finish what he starts it would have been better unposted instead of leaving the readers hanging

atleast make another chapter or something...you cant just leave a reader hanging like that

The other two comments stated that they didn't like the story. I will tell them to use their imagination and try to figure out what will happen in the morning.

Does every story have to have immediate sex acts or it's no good?

If they thought the story stunk, let them write the ending they want or shut up.

It has been several years since Chapter 1 came out, so I assume that Chapter 2 is not forthcoming. I would love to read more of the series, and hope that you revisit it soon.

please chapter 2!!!!!

please chapter 2 and thank you for ch. 01

Great story! Now to read Ch 2

i must continue to read on

Are you using it for emphasis? Or is there some unwritten rule of writing I'm unaware of? Because if not, and only you know what you mean by it, *word* is very distracting and meaningless, and unnecessary and amateurish, stop it, it adds no emphasis and just catches the eye in an irritating way. So far so good, but very little in the way of sex, this is veering into the fetish-side, so perhaps it should have been posted there, especially if part 2 is more of the same.

I hope they find a way to be together

I helped my wife when she was nursing our children. There is nothing sweeter or more erotic than sucking milk from a feeding mother's breast.

I did enjoy helping My wife out when she was Giving out Milk .. 2 kids and I enjoyed Her all so Much ..

Wow! A beautifully written (no nonsense) truly erotic story. 5*.

Wow! Amazing story so far, very erotic connection between siblings. Wish I had the opportunity to help out a nursing mother being my sister or current wife, though kids never entered my life. One can dream though.

As i had stated in the past, a beautifully written erotic story.

Good premise.

Action/involvement with breasts was too truncated. Not nearly enough in the way of preliminaries/foreplay/reluctance that needed to be overcome.

Needed much more dialog about how her breasts looked to him. Had he imagined them before? Are they as nice as he imagined? What did he think about when he thought about them? Did he masturbate to thoughts of her? What did he imagine? Would he like to try that?

Four stars.

Obviously a breast/milk fetish. Should have gotten around to him fucking her . . . .

Amazing! Wonderful build up to an obviously erotic story. Can't wait for him to start fucking her brains out. There's potential for another baby too.