All Comments on 'A Helping Hand'

...first submission! Great story, very well done, quite believable. I look forward to more stories from you!

Take care, have a great day!

~Sky~

You need to take this further sis needs to take his cherry at least 2 other ways. (mouth & pussy)

Bob and I both enjoyed it, darlin. Keep up the good work.

You need to keep this story going. Does bob go ajnd learn to eat his sister's pussy? Do they have intercourse? Does she set him up with one of her friends?

i do hope there is more or are more stories like it.

Please, more!

there are so manny derections, this story could go. I'll keep an eye out for chap 2

Great job! Super erotic! Please continue?

Great job! Super erotic! Please continue?

Good beginning for a posting here...now, I'm eagerly awaiting either the sequal ( He returns the favor...or Mom catches them at it [ and joins in ], or... ) or some more great stories.

This author is off to a fantastic start!!! :)

story well written. hope you decide to add another couple of chapters to this story. love to know what she did afterwords. extensive toy collection??

"My God Bob....if the girls in school knew about this monster of yours, they would be all over you!"

Sounds familiar, but then again I'm a perv, so maybe only in my imagination ;-)

Great start, how about some follow up chapters.

I have seen this story, at least the basic storyline, before so I wonder if you copied it?

I don't think I saw an age for Bob, except that he was still in H.S. What doesn't compute is how a guy with a big, long dong that erects nicely, and obviously plenty of jizz in store, can have almost no pubic hair.

You are the Ultimate big sister any guy would want & dream about in his wettest dreams imaginable!!! Love this story so much,also I love ALL your maaturbation ones too Ms.Swiss...Keep it up so me and your many fans can get off...HARD!! 🤘🏽

please please Pleeeease make a sequel soon!

Please remember it isn't only Americans who read these. Local words like sophomore and freshman mean nothing to us. If you are talking about first year or second or third year, please just say that. There are probably many more, but I'll leave that for you to think about as you write.

One more thing for other writers. Jocks and cheerleaders mean nothing to us either, and result in many a push on the NEXT button.

It was very difficult to read this story. The first paragraph held so many mistakes I knew I was in for it. Do you mean supposed instead of suppose? How about than my freshman instead of then? Maybe too exhausted instead of to? I'm glad to see our schools are doing such a fine job today!