All Comments on 'A Hero in Yellow Ch. 01'

Great start, you told it in a way that the reader (if gay stories are their thing) is kept wondering in anticipation what comes next. Keep it up, can't wait for chapter 2.

The story catches you right away. Hope the next chapter is soon and longer!! Keep them coming.

I don't really fancy hot sex right away.

I like a build up :)

So, great start so far!

Punctuation is your friend, I swear. It really is....

thanks for the read..... loving it!!!

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

It's a lovely start, but considering the real-life outcome, this story makes me sad.

wow fantastic . well wrote.? great excellent ......mmmmmm? i can say this cos ive readit before i am sure i have.?