A Hero's Return Pt. 02

Hmm got a bit confused between the husband and wife musings, making it difficult to discern what was happening.

Maybe, if you tagged the paras to distinguish the musing, it would have made it more clear.

The last part was equally confusing, so, the letter was finished and husband responded?

Tragic. Too little too late? Still humble pie helps the forgiveness pill. There but for the sake of God, men die?

A little sappy.

I smell a CUCK story in the making...

Yeah, not going to bother reading pt. 3.

Gets busted, goes to lovers house, doesn't communicate except to ask for her BIRTH CONTROL PILLS!?!

And then follows her lover out of state. True remorse there.

Why the fuck would the daughter even call her?!?

Just, blech.

This author clearly does not have sufficient insight or life experience to write competently on this topic. He has a very poor understanding of concepts such as love, commitment and duty.

Look her letter was heartfelt. But so what? The affair was like five months (sexual), 2-3 times a week. That is already beyond the pale. But then she goes back to the asshole predator after the reveal and her confessing what happened. That makes zero sense. And that is not remotely an act of contrition. Yeah she finally figured out the predator was an asshole. So what? After how long. Just completely invalidates any attempt at forgiveness, let alone reconciliation. A multi month affair while he is facing persistent danger overseas in a war, is the height of betrayal. If the author wants to even approach forgiveness or reconciliation, then lighten the betrayal. 5+ months, with some initial guilt, but then thinking she did nothing wrong? Meh that it is absurd. Not saying it doesn't happen. But absurd in the sense of any possible relationship going forward. She made her terrible choice repeatedly. Yeah she laments it miserably now and knows what she lost. But you reap what you sow. And her harvest has turned out rotten.

You made her unforgivable in both chapters, even going so far as having her return to the cheater AFTER her confession, and now you want to try and sell the readers a reconciliation? A very bad idea

Yada yada yada

I hate it.. It should have ended in chapter 1... Cause now, author will make MC get back with her... After all the pain she caused, after he lost a leg, 3 fingers and a ear, she will come to his life as if she never did all those things to him and his daughter... She deserves to suffer! But no! Author just make the good guy suffer a lot more in this horrible and sordid affair! How I wish that every cheater suffers imensity...

Second time through and this is truly bad

It seems as though most commentators are reacting to the story as if it were real. It’s not!

In this story it looks like she’s become very remorseful-—for what she did, not just sorrowful at how she hurt herself—and is seeking at least a verbal forgiveness from her husband.

There’s a hymn that goes “I SAW THE LIGHT”. SEEMS LIKE THIS CAN BE APPLID TO HER.

(Don’t ask me how I got a caps Lock on my iPad)

I’m looking forward to the next part no matter which way it goes from here. Great writing!

Bill S.

This story is the exact opposite of what should happen. The cheater is suppose to suffer consequences for the their shitty selfish entitled decisions. But oh no, this author feels the cheated upon spouse should suffer all the pain and consequences of his wife's cheating and betrayal. Its a prime example of White knight syndrome . White Knight syndrome is a term used to describe someone who feels compelled to “rescue” people in intimate relationships, often at the expense of their own needs. Such behaviors stem from a mindset that perceives the other sex as weak, dependent, absolved of all responsibility for their outcomes, and thinks that she will dedicate herself to loving him because of his help. In this case the author is "saving" Kathy and absolving her of her shitty behavior.

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What a powerful story!

Since I laid out the pure shit you delivered in the first part lets start with this (onyl because everyone will cheer at what a great writer you are, when you are not) "My reporter friend called me that afternoon to tell me that Connelly had packed up and left town leaving no forwarding address and that my soon to be ex-wife hadn't gone with him."

Yet page one of this mess clearly states "Stacy, you know that I ended up following Donald Connelly when he left town don't you?"

Sorry I wont bother continuing reading this horrid pile of idiocy beyond that line, because you obviously expected the reader to be dumber than a MAGA rally chump, clearly many are, but anyone paying attention would be offended at this mess.

The world of the discriminating reader does NOT miss you.

I can understand the negative reaction to the reconciliation but in real life a deep love will overcome the adversity of a cheating spouse. It did for me and that was 45 years ago. We both remember and the pain and sadness is something we share to this day along with a great amount of love.

If you decide to write any new stories please enroll in a refresher English Lit course to rediscover the basic rules of essay preparation.

No. She turned 180 degrees. Don't buy it!!!! !!!!!

Reading the passionate comments here, and in other RAAC Loving Wives stories leads me to wonder whether LW category should be split into two.

BTB and RAAC.

I do understand the vitriol many comments. For the sake of a good story the author creates an evil loathsome character that readers hate. So when the protagonist overlooks all her faults and reconcile, we all feel cheated somehow.

This leaves many readers infuriated and frustrated.

I often feel cheated coz by such stories. If I had known they were RAAC I probably would not have read them coz deep inside I want the wronged party to be the victor. This is fiction after all and not real life. In real life we seldom see the innocent victim win. Far more memorable is when "the baddie" wins and the innocent suffer. We want to forget that and see a fictional world where "good triumphs over evil"

Sadly good writers who can create an evil character and have readers feel hatred towards her will sadly suffer the scorn of many readers.

I mean after all said and done, we did pay good money to read this literature. We expect good value for money. lol.

Meh... Turned a mediocre story into a worse one. Trying to blame Bob for being gone as the reason she cheated repetitively. What's her excuse for going back to the other guy right after being caught and still having sex with him? Does that seem like the actions of someone who is remorseful or trying to make up for her past deeds.

Lol. This seems to be another RAAC piece of filth. This author, Carvohi, and other authors clearly have no self-esteem. They will be forever miserable as the person their companion takes advantage over and over. Not a way I would care to live, but I guess some people have to be miserable.

Bullshit. "you know that I ended up following Donald Connelly when he left town don't you?" GAME OVER.