All Comments on 'A Hole in the Wall'

Loved the graphic descriptions of your experiences. Brought back memories of my first time complete with the sensations of smell and taste. I hope you continue to write such compelling stories.

Outstanding writing telling a lurid tale, the best erotic writing I have seen! Good work.

Oh how I would love to been you. I want so bad to suck a dick right now and swallow all that cum. Ummmmmmm

As a 35 year devotee of gloryhole cocksucking (and, like the author, VERY good at it!), your story rings so true! All these years later, I'm still so glad I gave in to my homosexual lust, got to my knees in front of that dirty gloryhole and invited the horny stranger in the next movie booth to put his dripping cock into my mouth! That was truly a "seminal" moment for me (pun intended) and I found myself doing it again and again, sucking off stranger after stranger...and truly LOVING IT!!! Also, like you, as much as I wanted to suck off that "baker's dozen," I never quite reach it, settling for one unbelievably busy night at that sleazy ABS in which I was privileged to suck off eleven different men! Mmm-mmm, good! Great story...keep it up!

Nicely done. It reads very familiar, and resonates nicely with my experiences at the time. Keep writing!

I loved your story. First time similar, cum shot from me without being touched. First time I was game enough to put my cock through the hole I lasted about 10 seconds before shooting into someones mouth. first time I sucked some one it took awhile before he came. I found I wasn't a great cock sucker, could not seem to get them over the edge, I heard a guy say let me fuck you. I turned, I felt him finger me, then I felt lube applied and then his hard cock open my anus for the first time and he pushed deeper and fucked me. First time, initial hurt, pulling away but then I let him fuck me and he came quickly. Now, I only suck them to get them hard so they can fuck me, not many decline but all who fuck me I manage to get them to deliver their cum inside me. I must be a better ass fuck than cock sucker.

lots of memories. I have the same thoughts at times - wishing all those people I never knew made it through the plague.

You obviously have excellent writing skills and the scenes are great but there is one technique you use that can ruin it for me. Not speaking for anyone else but the constant switching between carrot and stick is a drag. You build up the scene so well then destroy it by, what you probably think of as a counter-point, but which is just negative details. You're so excited to be in a booth and the potential then spend a paragraph talking about how filthy it is or a deformed dick, or getting VD or cheating on your girlfriend or how to not give a blowjob and on. There's no need to try to make the good better by illustrating the shit.