All Comments on 'A Holiday to Remember'

Waiting for the continuation.

She needs to keep her cunt filled with his seed. When they go home she should have a baby bump as a gift from James

I hope the follow up is quick in coming

I really liked it. Detected only one little writing error.

Loved the story. Looking for more. James having 3 girls at once?

Most enjoyable cant wait for the follow up

Great little story with good eroticism and a nice teaser at the end. Well written, though on two occasions he rubbed her nipple with HER finger. Odd mistake I’d like to understand!

How I hope the "something I need to tell you" doesn't turn out to be what I suspect.

Too many errors in punctuation and grammar. I suggest you find an editor. Aside from that, he wanted to go to Mexico in July during the rainy season when temps hover near 100 degrees? Odd.

Great start to the story. I really liked how you developed and grew the situation. Sure, there were a few errors here and there but we all get those on occasion.

My only niggle is that Anna jumped into bed with him too quickly. A build up to the good stuff maybe would have been better, but I appreciate your efforts all round.

Good one, look forward to reading part 2!

trerrible english grammar and spelling. ok story, though